Record of meeting 7th October 2015
The Writers
Leonie, Cathy, Melissa :), Di, Terry, Juan, Lynn - Great to have a visit from Melissa
Words of the day
Habituated - to make or become accustomed to something
Scales of Justice - symbol of modern law, fair distribution of law
Paucity - scarcity or small amount
Anachronism - attributing an event, object or custom to the wrong period
Acerbic - bitter or harsh
Bonanza - rich vein of gold, abundance
Exigency - an urgent need or demand
Deontic - relating to duty and obligation as in ethical concepts
Given the eclectic choice of words some very inventive stories were written in the short space of 10 minutes. These were about TV Football commentators, court cases, fairness, Wild West and exploring the emotional aftermath when things are not fair.
Reading of Homework
The exercise was "Antique" and the description of the Hillbilly antique shop complete with accent to match was a gem, followed by a descriptive and poignant story of a chance discovery of a jewellery box. The poem on the antique shop on the hill in Milton galloped along with a Man from Snowy River lilt that Banjo would have been proud of.
Other poems read were a moving tribute to trees and their importance in the environment and a very funny poem on the humble but not so loveable rat.
Exercise of the Day
Write a descriptive essay on hands, the observation perhaps of someone sitting in a doctors waiting room, or watching someone's hand in the making of something. A potter, labourer, knitter, shipwright, builder, pianist, a cook an artist. Are they young hands worn before their time, gnarled, veined, beautiful, graceful.
The majority of writers wrote from experience of either their mums or grandmothers. One with an intriguing twist was about blood on the hands of what turned about to be a worker in an abattoir.
Homework
You receive a letter from the past. Focus part of the story on the external appearance of the envelope, is it typed or handwritten, do you recognise the writing, can you see the postmark, if it has one? Are there faded letters on the envelope? Describe the letter itself, the feel, the smell, the paper, the emotions on reading it. Where are you when you receive it and where are you when you read it? What were you doing and what mood were you in before and after the letter came?
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08 October 2015
30 September 2015
Record of meeting 30 September 2015
The writers
Terry, Helene,
David R, Leonie, Cath and welcome to Juan
Words of the day
Ineffable = too
great or extreme for description
Soporific = sleep
inducing
Peruke = a wig
Trauma =
unpleasant experience, injury
Peluca = wig
Plethora =
overabundance
Stories from words of the day
The six diligent
writers created amazing stories and poems from words of the day - The antique
shop, Send the audience to sleep, The jury, Boring Joe lost his wig, Watching
an adult cartoon and A beautiful sunset.
The writers
present read out their entertaining homework on the topics - Fertile
imagination, In her head, Doing it for her, Too many ideas in my head, Dead row
inmate and The Death penalty.
Exercise - The place was a real dump
From the depleted
numbers we used our creativity to describe a real dump in the following
stories and poems - Away a few days, The fight at the airport, Person of
interest and My first house sitting job.
Homework
Antique
23 September 2015
Record of meeting 23 September 2015
Terry, Cath,
Wendy, David R, Helene
Geoff get well
soon and happy birthdays to Wendy and David R.
Words of the day
Quell = to
overcome
Febrile = nervous
energy
Loblolly = male
surgeons assistant on a warship
Compel = force
someone to do something against their will
Zombie = are
undead creatures, typically depicted as mindless reanimated human corpses with
a hunger for human flesh
Stories from words of the day
From our weird
words we created glorious and gory stories and poems -Dreams of porridge; When
I get up; The ship lurched; The good ship Bess and What is that smell.
Three dedicated
writers read their homework - Living in the Lodge; A whiff of this and that;
and The vote.
Other readings
Acrobatic read by
David R a great poem set in a Big Top. Later he read Holy Dooly a poem without the letter e.
Exercise 1 – Oulipo pronounced ulipo
David R explained
the oulipo is a gathering of mainly French speaking writers and mathematicians who
seek to create works using constrained writing techniques.
Four dedicated
writers concentrated hard to write stories and poems not using the letter e -
Too much coughing; Don’t run with scissors; Colour; and It's fun.
Exercise 2 - I can’t put my finger on it
We started our
second exercise with the words "I can’t put my finger on it" and came up with the
gems - I will never drift off again; Sent me into space; Going to Paris ; and Singing and
dancing.
Homework
It’s all in my
head
16 September 2015
Record of meeting 16 September 2015

The writers
David C, Leonie,
Di, Lynn,
Terry, Cath, Wendy, Helene,
David R, Geoff
The words of the day
Ardour = passion
Aesthete = lover
of art
Cynophobia = fear
of dogs
Plebiscite =
national vote
Accolade = honour
conferred
Antimacassars =
prevent staining
Numchakus = danger
sticks or chain sticks
Despumate = to
clarify or purify a liquid
Chimera = fire
breathing female monster
Incumbent = person
holding the office
Stories from words of the day
From the diverse
list of words we created a range of weird stories - The Coffee Bean, Beating the
dogs, Meeting the old boss on a dark street, I deserve it, Barely fitted
through the door, The Dali Lama, The rose garden, Could not be used and Never
put animals down.
A small number of
dedicated writers read their homework as follows - Emails between ex PMs, He
almost hit her, The good old days, The loop, The three bores and Kev’s ditty.
Recommendations and local information
Leonie recommended
listening to music by a group called “Time for three”
David C announced
Basin Bites has reopened as “G&T” and recommended a visit.
David R
recommended “Tea at Tiffs” at Sanctuary Point at the location of the former
Purple Bean and near The Lodge.
Geoff discussed self
publishing his novel and is looking at Xlibris and Balboa Press and will let us
know about his progress.
Wendy will further
investigate Grease at the Entertainment centre to be produced by The Albatross Theatre
Company in November.
Exercise
We wrote stories
and poems using three word sentences starting “On the road” with stories
meandering across the landscape.
I smell a rat or
a letter from
Kevin Rudd to
Tony Abbott
a letter from
Kevin Rudd to
Tony Abbott
11 September 2015
Record of meeting 9 September meeting
Terry, David C, Cath, Lynn, Leonie, Wendy,
Elizabeth, Geoff
Apology – Helene … we’re missing you
still !
Words of the day
Impunity = exempt from punishment,
disregarding
Quiddity = real nature (of a thing); or fine distinction
Orientation = relative position, inclination,
attitude
Excoriate = criticize, sensure; or remove
part of skin
Malign = slander, speak evil of
Salubrity = enabling health, healthy
Adduce = quote, or cite as proof
Double-speak = obscure speech
Writing from W o D
The
Usual Political Targets were attacked by the Usual Assailants (David, Terry,
Geoff); Wendy urned a laugh with her tale; Leonie revealed medical infighting,
and Cath wrote of (in)mates
Member works offered
Leonie
brought us more of her period tales ; Terry continues with his detective drama
- we await more from both.
Homework
Fast-write on topics including ‘after all these
years’
Homework for 16 Sep
Message
– “I have your key”
08 September 2015
Record of meeting 2 September 2015
Important details of the day
2. Goodbye to Clare with tea and cake
Present
David C, Terry,
Cath, Wendy, Clare and Geoff - a good strong mix of Poetic and Writing talent.
Words of the day
Fey: Vague near death
Adage: Proverb or
saying
Pernicious: Wicked
Evil hearted
Malediction: Evil
speaking, a curse
Lachrymose:
Tearful shedding tears
Recalcitrant:
Obstinate Unco-operative
Stories from words of the day
The talented
writers created some very interesting Quick Writes with a natural political
bent.
Homework reading
Terry continued
the saga of McCord. Clare wrote about falling in love. David was Touched by
Angels
Tea and Cake to farewell Clare
Exercise - Six items
Write about six
items found in a handbag or mans pocket.
Ventolin Puffer--
Coins-- Small Umbrella-- Check Book-- Personal Fan-- Opal Card. Poetic words of
wisdom.
Final exercise - Five facts or statements
about you
Four True - One a
Lie - unbelievable so funny.
Homework
TOMB
26 August 2015
Record of meeting 26 August 2015
The writers
Terry, Clare,
David C, Leonie, Helene and Di
The words of the day
Shizzle = for sure
Estrade = a raised
platform
Flamboyant =
glitzy, showy, flashy
Quiddity =
essential nature of a thing
Timorous = nervous
or lacking in confidence
Paranoia =
distracted, irregular, delusions
Stories from words of the day
The six water logged writers created flamboyant
Five writers read
out their homework on the topics - Having fun, Hope in Spring, Welcome to the
cafe, No longer a bored walker and Another one.
Terry read out his
funny political poem ‘Ned Kelly’s head” the topic suggested by Geoff.
Leonie read out
more of the Madeline story about a visit to a boardwalk in Brighton .
Collaborative writing exercise
Each writer started
a story with a paragraph and the other writers all contributed to complete the
story. The collaborative writing produced the entertaining stories - The
affair, Pay before you eat, Two heads, Time, A sparrows knee cap and Dog
trainer to the gods.
Homework
Take a movie title
and use that as a prompt for your homework.
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