Thank you one and all for your company. Special thanks to Wendy who organised the lunch and to Pauline who came bearing Christmas gifts.
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31 July 2015
Christmas in July 2015
Nine of our most adventurous writers enjoyed our Christmas in July lunch at the Lodge. The food and service were great in a quiet pleasant environment.
Thank you one and all for your company. Special thanks to Wendy who organised the lunch and to Pauline who came bearing Christmas gifts.
Thank you one and all for your company. Special thanks to Wendy who organised the lunch and to Pauline who came bearing Christmas gifts.
29 July 2015
Record of meeting 29 July 2015
Big news – Christmas in July
lunch – 12 noon
Friday 31 July 2015 – The Lodge Sanctuary Point
The writers
Wendy, Sarah,
Clare, Helene, Pauline, Terry, Leonie, Cath
Words of the day
Totes = totally
Aloof = haughty or
distant
Disconsolate =
very unhappy
Hierogram = a
sacred symbol
Proleptic =
anticipatory answer
Kvetch = constant
complaining slang
Eclectic =
composed of different tastes
Ebullient = full
of excitement and enthusiasm
Stories from words of the day
We created an
eclectic range of ebullient stories from the words of the day - At the markets;
I anticipated the Fair; Waiting for the lecture; All the praise; Threw it on
the roof; My favourite book store; Wide range of ideas; and tattoos on her
face.
Five industrious
writers read out interesting stories on the topics - Back to WA, Two
police officers, The reunion of the class of 99, There’s someone in the room
and I avoided Madeline.
Exercise 1 - Character building
We developed a character
by deciding the name, age, marital status, what they eat for breakfast, TV
shows, dreams, a secret, language used and body language.
We then wrote a
short story about our character on the topics - By the kitchen sink, Sonia is
jewel encrusted, The weight should fall off, Banter between neighbours on Pick Pocket Lane ,
Felicity was a loner, Thanks love and Blueberry yoghurt.
Exercise 2 - Seventeen
We had fun
creating a round table story starting with - When I was seventeen, regressing to
age three, pocket money, favourite lollies, Saturday afternoon movies, chores
and progressing to age 59.
Homework
Homeless
22 July 2015
Record of meeting 22 July 2015
The writers
Wendy, Clare,
Helene, Cath, Pauline, Terry, David C, Geoff, Elizabeth and welcome to Sarah
Words of the day
Forlorn = sad
Pique = annoyance
Salve = soothe
Flaunt = to
display oneself
Egregious =
conspicuously bad or offensive
Trattoria = an Italian style eating establishment
Tangential =
divergent or merely touching on a matter
Zoanthropy =
delusions of being an animal
Allegiant = loyal
or faithful
We used words of
the day to create some animalistic stories - Dressed as a Polar Bear, The
speaker, Jumped on the table, Wearing animal prints, Not part camel, Henry was
a show off, Inflated his ego, Fur coat and balaclava, The cricket is over and
Quality of the coffee.
Five wishy
stories were read out - Coins in a fountain; Why do we have three; The Wish
family; John, Joe & me and Wealth, Health & self.
Discussions
- The many uses of WD 40 were discussed
from using it to clean greasy hands to helping stiff joints.
- Terry recommended and brought in “The
outcasts of Foolgarah” by Frank Hardy.
- Wendy will investigate booking a Christmas
in July lunch on Friday 31 July at The Lodge Sanctuary Point - 12 noon. More
details next week.
Exercise 1 - The travelling tale
Clare started a travelling tale with “There was a day when the sun didn’t shine”. We then went
around the table continuing the story and leading to an amazing ending.
Exercise 2 - The basement
We used the theme
of the basement to create some deep and dark stories - The old wooden house, I
wish I had a basement, No basement for me, You have a day, First time here (3
word lines), $40K over budget, Dark and dingy, When it snows, Why cant I and
The creepiest place.
Exercise 3 - The overcoat pocket
We looked inside
our overcoat pockets and discovered - The torn lining of my coat, In the small
bag, Red back spider, Old and smelly, To keep me warm, Letter in the pocket, My
true love and You know how it goes.
Homework
I haven’t seen
her/him for two years…
15 July 2015
Record of meeting 15 July 2015
The writers
Terry, Clare,
Cathy, Helene, Leonie, David C
The words of the day
Livid = black and
blue, furiously angry
Defalcate = to
embezzle
Infra dig =
unbecoming, demeaning
Hathos = pleasure
of hating someone
Dross = impurity,
waste matter
Rusticate = to
expel temporarily from a college or send to the country
Writing from words of the day
We used our words
of the day to create stories on the topics - Enjoyment, Retiring,
Mean minded Treasurer, The defendant, Living in Queensland and Another way to infuriate.
Five writers read
out serious and funny homework stories - The influence of labels, Chilly morning
coffee, The box syndrome, Living in a ticky tacky box and Working for the
project. David C also read two old homework stories called Blow flies and
Policing at its best.
Exercise 1- When I asked
Choose two nouns,
two verbs, two adjectives and two names and write a story using all eight
words starting with “When I asked”.
For this exercise the writers
produced the following stories - His friend had gone mad, He didn’t know, Busy
doing nothing, Such a mess, Freshly washed hair and What book?
Exercise 2 -The scream was loud
We defined the word
Indaba and wrote a story starting with "The scream was loud"
We produced some
interesting definitions from bar to goddess and created stories about - Shrill
noise, The smell of brewed hops, The lion, The kitchen goddess, Possessed by a
diva and The curse.
The homework
Three wishes
08 July 2015
Record of meeting 8 July 2015
The brave writers
Wendy, Clare,
Helene, Elizabeth, Geoff, Leonie, Terry
The eye catching words of the day
Exigency = urgent
need
Vanquished = conquer
Vanquished = conquer
Ice blink = luminous
appearance on the horizon caused by a reflection of ice
Volition = wish, will, decision, choice, desire, preference, option
Bunkum =
non-sense, insincere or foolish talk
Fervid = intense
enthusiasm to an excessive degree
We used words of
the day to create a range of stories - The crocodile tamer, Talking sense, No
fight back, Life at the North Pole, Fathers advice, Before dinner and Words on
paper.
Three brave writers
read their homework on the topic “wildlife can eat you”, with the brilliant - What
else am I to do - a poem from Clare, Please don’t feed the bears by Leonie and
So wild and free from Helene.
Future activities
Wendy reported on
the costs of river cruises and it was decided to have a Christmas in July lunch
probably at the Lodge in Sanctuary Point. More details next week.
Terry suggested
devoting one meeting each month to conduct workshops. Terry is seeking further information from a writing
group in Adelaide
with a view to us conducting workshops – in particular about performance
poetry. The idea would be to write a poem or short story and present to the
group using voice, language, costumes etc to communicate the message.
Exercise
We wrote on the
topic - Conversations in my head. An excellent range of stories were read out
- Good, evil and myself; A free offer; On Center court;
Thought preparation; More options and What a beautiful day.
Homework
Write about
putting people in boxes – have you put people in boxes or have you been put in
a box – categorised by appearance, age, disability, communication skills,
assets etc
01 July 2015
Record of meeting 1 July 2015
The writers
David R, Helene,
Wendy, Clare, Terry, Leonie, Geoff, Lynn, Cath
Cohort = group of
people of common interest, band of associates
Tippet = scarf of
fur, band of silk, used in fishing
Adulate = to
flatter or admire excessively
Evanescent =
vanishing, transitory
Transpire =
something happened or took place, give off water vapour
Velleity = wish or
inclination not strong enough to take action
Loving cup = two or three handled cup to share
Unkempt = untidy
hair
Rue = to repent
The writing from words of the day
We created an
array of stories and poems on the topics - Around the Pope, The end, The red
haired woman, From union days, The banquet, I’m scruffy, Cold sores, Social
wrecks and Pop groups.
The reading of home work
Six dedicated
writers read out their homework with the titles - Ode to the socks – a clever
poem, The unfaithful sock, I lost my twin – a fun poem, Santa’s coming – a
children’s story, The explorer ode and Where are my socks.
After our readings
we heard some solutions for securing straying socks from several writers.
Other reading
David R read his
poem about climate change. Later Clare read her poem The ballard of the onion –
a tear making tale.
Exercise - Red shoe, guitar and a unique
cake
We used the trio
of subjects to cook up great stories - The brightly lit stage, A big
decision, There’s no place like home, The man in red shoes, Baby shoes, My
kitchen apron, In our living room, The shoe cake – very funny poem and The glitter
on the shoe cake.
Exercise – The last time I saw …………………
We wrote about Parkes
NSW, An elephant, My toes, Her, my primary school, Maureen, Paris, Stewart and
my body,
Exercise – 5 minute TV advertisement for
asparagus
We created high
quality advertisements on the topics - High in fibre, It’s slim, Put in a
blender, Promises of being sharply, Better than Brussels sprouts, Vitamin B
without the fuss, You too can be slim, Give your taste buds a treat and Rather
eat tyre off a bike.
Homework
In my country
dinner eats you
24 June 2015
Record of meeting 24 June 2015
The writers
Wendy, David R,
Clare, Helene, Pauline, Cath, Elizabeth, David C, Lynn, Terry, Geoff
The words of the day
Clandestine = Kept
secret or private
Atrocious = wicked
or brutal or bad taste
Nebbish = a timid
or ineffectual man
Scuttle = cause a
ship to sink or run horridly
Pernicious =
deadly or wicked
Meditation = think
deeply about something
Paroxysm = sudden
outburst
Freegan = a
recycler of food
Cavil = to raise
irritating petty objection
Abderian = silly
laughter, incessant merriment
Bunker = military
fortification etc
The stories from words of the day
We created
pernicious stories about - Taken away by the police, Peaches on the beaches, The
meeting, Overcome, The balls, The Immigration Minister, Reasons for his outburst,
Ferdinand and local government, A Group of politicians, A wet paper bag and Seeping
through me
The reading of homework
Eight hardy
writers read out their homework on the topics - It’s all in a name, Stop that
jiggly dance, Peace and the log fire, Run away for biscuits and Brie, Memories
by the sea, A trickle of sand, Stories with Meals on wheels and Clancy’s
contemplation
Discussions and ideas
Pauline read out her
impressions on the movie “Still Alice” which led to a discussion on the topic of
dementia.
Geoff reminded us about
the 2015 Miles Franklin
award to Sofie Lagana for “The eye of the sheep” and the New Copyright Internet
law recently passed.
David R read his
humorous poem - The black stump and David C read his 500 word story Lost and
found.
The exercises
1. Why I write?
We expressed
various reasons for our writing - I can’t say, To avoid calculating my tax,
Some thing new, Ideas to give, To keep in touch through a blog, I have to
write, To be remembered, An outlet for the information in my brain, An inner
fight, Natural expression and Challenge and improvement.
2. An interesting character from the past
A sheep with one
eye and three legs, Wedding cakes and sheep’s eyes, Bah humbug, A man with a
tattoo on his head helped me, A comb over, Protector of the castle, The boss is
in the office, Emma was an intense person, Cosmic at the Lady Denman, Gives a
wink and The jail bird.
Homework
The lost sock
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