30 July 2014

Meeting 30th July 2014

News:

Wendy - Shopped til she dropped at ShellHarbour Square
Melissa - Moving Aug. 27 (Boo Hoo)
Cath - Increased to swimming 26 laps 
Jo - Gave contact info. about Shoalhaven Councillor, Mark.Kitchener@shoalhaven.nsw.gov.au
Elizabeth - Visited Apple Tree Flat Bay
Brian - First time visitor to the group, writes poetry
David C - Chopping firewood, mixing with other poets
Geoff - Looking forward to watching Borgen resume on SBS
Terry - Went away for the weekend with the car club to Mogo
David R - He and his partner went to Bendalong
Diane - First time visitor, interested in writing about her travelling adventures

Word of the day:

Wendy - edacity - greedy
Melissa - larrikin - hooligan, person who disregards convention
Cath - emotive - arouses intense feelings
Jo - salivate - to make the mouth water
Elizabeth - cringle - eye loop in a rope (nautical term)
David - ambsace - complete bad luck
Geoff - febrile - feverish
Terry - inscrutable - incapable of being understood
David R - flabbergasted - surprised

Activity: Quick write using as many of the above words as possible in a poem or story

Reading of Homework: "Age of suspicion" 

Jo - read a story about indulgent behaviour and a murder
Garry - musings about suspicion
Elizabeth - read a story about a previous homework topic, 'it's not what it seems'
Brian - read a poem, 'the smartest Dad of them all'
David C - read a story about a suspicious child who discovers who his parents are
Terry - read another part of his novel 
David R - Inkling, a poem

Announcements and readings:

Geoff - Sydney library is having an event in August to celebrate author Thea Astley, he also brought in a book by Janet Frame, "You Are Now Entering The Human Heart" Let him know if you'd like to borrow it

Jo - there is a new moth in the area, it is yellow, purple and furry...and very, very scary

David R - read a poem, Satisfaction, recounting the splendours of nature by the sea

Exercise: A peculiar pet
The group produced a range of material from short stories to poetry about peculiar pets including a blue tongued lizard, cats, a slave, moths, and rocks! 

Homework: "Ambushed"

23 July 2014

Record of meeting 23 July 2014


News

Terry had a good lunch yesterday with great people

Cath had no new information about the mystery pizza delivery

Jo attended the local council meeting and received some help about her fallen trees

Leonie is going to see Mother Africa as a belated treat for her birthday

David C had a white crane steal the fish from his backyard pond

Geoff had an uneventful week with the highlight a visit from a local plumber

David R has recovered from his medical treatments and is arranging to self publish some of his poems

Helene took her grandson back to Canberra

 
Words of the day

Machiavellian = deceitful, perfidious

Freeload = bludge

Cleave = hold or divide

Cupidity = greed for money or possession

Emerald = is a gemstone, and a variety of the mineral beryl coloured green

Exotica = objects out of the ordinary

Abscond = to leave horridly and secretly

Contend = to strive, struggle in opposition

 
Stories from words of the day

We created an amazing range of stories from the words of the day - Visit to the theatre, Gemstones and the gentrified classes, Family jewels, A villain from Goulburn, The dinosaur park, More than his share and I’ve rung the police.

 
Reading of homework

Misunderstood, The witness – maybe more of Terry’s novel, The snake, The cement mixer, Exotica and A stage production.


Reading

David R – is reading and recommends “The colonial queen” by Peter Corris

Jo – recommends “The timeless land” by Eleanor Dark

David R read out his latest poem Ambiance

 
Exercises

1. Sounds of touching – we wrote stories about

Caresses and bites, A compromise, The comfort of water, Coat flapping, fingers snapping, The sounds of food cooking, Air in a carburettor, Tabasco sauce and Sound of Exotica.

 
2. A progressive write on the topic “Not what is seems” –

In my underwear, So bright and clean, Leaves in the trees, Musical chairs, Pulled the pin and Ancient exotic remains.

 
Homework

The age of Suspicion

 
Recorded and posted by Helene
 

 

16 July 2014

Record of meeting - Wednesday 16 July 2014


Reminder lunch at Vincentia Golf Club

Tuesday 22 July at 12.30 pm

 
News

Jo bought in a picture of a snowflake and told us about a woman who attacked her front door.

Geoff announced the opening of a Tapas bar, in Milton.

Elizabeth had a scam call telling her she was going to get money from the Government and her son in law did not clean out her fridge.

Leonie went to a pain specialist, who did not help, also had a visit from a friend and a lovely lunch in Ulladulla. 

Helene had an accident in her car.

Wendy went for a beautiful fish and chips picnic at Culburra.

Cath played good Samaritan to her neighbours who were away in Vincentia.

Terry saw Chicago at the Entertainment Centre on Sunday.

 
Words of the day

Inimical = hostile or unfavourable

Morass = muddy or boggy ground or mess

Chief = boss

Nostalge = thinking about the past

Exacerbate = to annoy

Authentic = real

Impugn = assail by words

Equilibrium = balance, symmetry, stability

 
Writing from words of the day

Helene – a common criminal

Wendy – swinging from the trees and sinking

Cath – not an antique

Jo – the objectors

Geoff – Clive from Queensland

Terry – pigs might fly in the Red house

Elizabeth – the rock

Leonie – One man lost

 
Reading of homework

Helene – Fifi and Gigi to Fiji and An interesting phone call

Wendy – oldies but goodies

Jo – You should have been there

Terry – murder in Camperdown – possible part of Terry’s novel

Elizabeth – a planned visit to the beach

Leonie – Marry me again - more of the Madeline story

 
Two exercises

1. Day dream believer – we composed stories of three word sentences

Cath – a day delight

Jo – Spring and death

Geoff – out the window

Terry – I love school cloudy or fine

Elizabeth – long year gone

Helene – Visit exotic ports

Wendy – all day long

 
2. We wrote stories about a brush with danger

Wendy – sweeping with danger

Helene – Dangerous tooth cleaners

Elizabeth – Searching for eggs

Terry – cigarettes buts and drawing pins

Geoff – blood cousins

Jo – petrol and broken brakes

Cath – the building site

 
Homework

Not what it seems
 

Recorded and posted by Helene 

10 July 2014

Meeting of 9th July 2014


ATTENDANCE/NEWS:
Wendy – Visited friends in Talong
Cath – Celebrated a friend’s birthday at the Mercure in Gerringong
Terry – Spent time with his musically talented teenage grandson, is also have a poem, “Hold My Hand”, published in the Alzheimer’s Journal – congrats Terry!
Pam – Busy with her new bundle of joy, a 9 week King Charles Cavalier that goes by the name of Henri
Elizabeth – Storing wine for one neighbour and giving the other’s something to talk about…
David C. – Brother-in-Law passed away, has been spending time with his grandson
Mike – Joined us for the first time today, he is living in Coastal Waters, writes children’s books and poetry  -  welcome Mike!
Geoff – Had a letter to the editor published about the procurement of military aircraft
Melissa – Is moving in late August

WORD OF THE DAY:
David C. – Jejung – boring
Mike – raffle – lottery
Geoff – homage – tribute
Melissa – jaunty – sprightly
Wendy – formicate – to swarm
Cath – tactile – touchy/feely
Terry – gratuitous – unnecessary
Pam – loom – appear dimly
Elizabeth – contretemps – a hitch
The group then used all the words in a quick write and produced thought provoking, humorous pieces, as usual of course!

READING OF LAST WEEK’S HOMEWORK: a phone number written on a wall
Garry – a short story about a phone number on a wall
Terry – “The Dunny”, a poem
Elizabeth – a short story about a number left on a wall, with a surprising conclusion
David – “Ring Me”, a short story about a ladies’ night out, also with a surprising ending

OTHER READINGS:
Mike – read a few of his poems inspired by the local surrounds, including “The Sailor”
Terry – read his poem, “Hold My Hand”
David C. – read his piece that will be published on the ABC OPEN webpage, “It’s a Great Feeling”

ANNOUNCEMENTS:
Poet’s Breakfast this Sunday at Angel’s CafĂ© in Huskisson, starts at 9 am – there will be an open mic, come along and read your poetry

QUICK WRITE:
2 nouns that rhyme, 2 verbs that rhyme, 2 adjectives that rhyme, 2 names that rhyme – use the 8 words in a story or poem

HOMEWORK TOPIC: an honest answer


02 July 2014

Record of meeting 2 July 2014

 
News of the week

Geoff finished the first draft of the Japanese novel he has been working on for 10 years

David C is organising a poets breakfast at the Angels on Sunday 13 July – let David know if you want to participate

Leonie has written 35,000 words of her book and went again to the beautiful Wollongong Botanical Gardens

Elizabeth had her amazing granddaughter and great grand son visiting

Terry caught up with old friends in Sydney while his trailer sailer is now in Canberra on the way to Perth.

Wendy had a freezing time in Canberra and used her new blow up bed – next she wants to add an electric blanket for future visits.

Helene saw and enjoyed the movie Grace of Monaco and had her lap top fixed.

Pam sent a message that last night she collected Henri, her new tiny puppy so stayed at home today.


Discussion
 
We discussed recycling collection that can be arranged by the council. Contact the local council for more details of these services.

 
Words of the day

 Digress = to wander or depart off the track

Conquer = to defeat or sundew or over come

Motley = diversity in colour or character

Pervicacious = stubborn

Perfidious = treacherous or disloyal

Tragic = sad, disastrous, heartbreaking

Thuggee = a cutthroat ruffian, criminal

Connive = conspire or cover up

 
Writing from words of the day

We created stories covering the topics - A plan, Lack of patience, Next door neighbours, Crew in government, Good character will prevail, Living with the consequences, Tony and Clive, and the Ape.

 
Reading of homework

David C - 38 seconds

Helene - Smoke, the dog

Terry – fire dancers

Garry – life in the wilderness

Elizabeth – Granma was a hoarder

Leonie – the draw of the smoke

 
Reading

Geoff read us part three of his Japanese novel - a great reading Geoff

 
Exercise

We used the topic Panic to create a wonderful array of stories about

Nothing in the fridge to eat, What’s the time Mr Wolf, She forgot the boiled eggs, The exploding gas bottles, Work in a TV factory and Not the usual path.

 
Homework

Write a story or poem about your character phoning a number found on a rest room (toilet) wall.

 

 Recorded and posted by Helene

 

 

 

 

 

 

25 June 2014

Record of meeting 25 June 2014

Present Pam, David C, Jo, Wendy, Leonie, Geoff, Helene, Cath, Elizabeth.

News

Leonie went to see her mum in Queensland.  Had a good time, lovely time then at movies.

David et al went to Sofala and they all laughed themselves silly all weekend.

Elizabeth checked pacemaker, there followed a mystery reading.  No explanation, mystery remains.

Cath had visitors, brother and wife, from UK, where the coach trip was not informative.  In our land, the showers at the Pool are okay now.

Pam told us about furtive business - quite existentialist - the dog, it seems was the reason - needs to be written down, Pam.

Helene went to Pigeon House Mountain Lookout, it was a bit expensive, but her pumping is continuing.  (work that out).

Wendy bought blow-up bed.  I think we felt jealous.  Finds it amazing.  It suits her sports car. Humph!

Geoff went to last concert of the Bay and Basin Music Group.  Sad.  Were awfully good too.

Jo was tangling with fallen trees.  And sons again.


Words of the Day

hieroglyphic - symbol

cadence = sound of a voice

manducate - to chew

passion - a very strong feeling about person or thing

inherit - to receive upon death of another

collateral - security for repayment of loan

argot - jargon of a group esp. criminal

adjudicate - to sit in judgement

impetus - force or energy of movement


Stories concocted from 'Words'

Wendy: Always impartial, you know.

Helene:  In a tomb.  Sam wanted to go to Cairo.

Pam: Collateral, inheritance, all money to be used.

Cath: Manuscript - weird writing - let me know what it is all about, she says.

Elizabeth: Passion - she wanted a loan - decided it was 'up yours too!'

David: Rap music - words of song - what were they?

Leonie: Audience, contestants, noisy words. People chewing chips, bought a building.

Jo: A ridiculous story.

Geoff: Twelve dollars - good deal. Sons, cool.  Not like him.


Homework:  'The Text Message read: Very Clever!'

Gary: A little girl - writes verse - much imagination about Wendy who moved to Sydney had kids etc.  Explains how Wendy wrote poems, got them from under her bed.

David: Next Master Chef.  Mexican - scallops - he seemed to think it was really good - but no, it was more ... very clever.

Leonie: Free association - Mary, Mary - gorilla and dog - friends - people should be like animals.

Jo: The text message was really that only.

Wendy: Wrote a 'duck-it' list.  What she doesn't ever want to do, e.g. running with the bulls.

Helene: The expert witness - courtroom drama - love and sex getting into the room, can't beat it.

Pam: How clever!  Bench in the sun, book with dedication - 'Faces' is the subject matter. l4 chapters of 'faces' read to her mother. She read that it was very clever.  ????

 
Exercise
 
We all did a speed-rite. It is explained so: Whatever comes into your head.  I think we won't have time to hear everyone's head. 

Wot duzit orl mien?


Homework 
 
'When Jill saw the smoke at the top of the hill, she knew it was too late.'