30 August 2017

Record of meeting 30 August 2017


The writers


Dennis, Pat, Lynn, Cath, Helene, Pauline, Terry, Elizabeth
Thanks to Pauline who did a great job facilitating an enjoyable meeting



The words

Diaphanous – translucent
Nemesis – retribution, avenger
Sardonic – smirking, patronising
Pernicious – hostile, unpleasant
Punctilious – fine point, particular detail
Egregious – prominent, inappropriate, outrageous, shocking
Salamander – a lizard like animal, person to endure great heat
Seaweed – large algae growing in the sea or on rocks below the high water mark

Writing from words of the day
The writers grabbed the finer points from the words of the day and wrote about - Saving our society, A cure, A flower in a button hole, Her eyes fixed on me, He fell on seaweed, I see and smell, Abandoned and human enemies.

Reading of homework
The enthusiastic writers read out homework about:  Peter – not sure where he went wrong, Bimbo wore only mink, Remembering a name and skin texture, On the veranda, Sir Gordon, Hockey teams, Cheryl a story teller and Cowboys and Indians.

Exercise – a black dot on a white page
A mysterious exercise which resulted in the stories: Love of white, A peep hole, a well, a dress makers pin, on the mountain side, Donald Trump in deep water, It’s a sign not a song, cotton mills, black holes, a trick, a blunder, a bee, and a clean white sheet.

Exercise – disappearance of soap an international mystery


The writers wrote about soap with the following stories: In Warsaw, Scattered cushions, In Paris, London and Ireland, Barnaby and terra bytes, I sniffed the air, She took the Swiss soap to Kenya and no soap in Vincentia.



Homework
Write about your moods and emotions from a memory of a moment of your life (Professor Brian Cox describes it as a moment in space and time)

27 August 2017

Meeting 23rd August 2017



Writers
Terry, Cath, Lynn, Juan, Roberta, Pat

Re Lunch...the lunch planned for Monday 28th August has been postponed until further notice.

Words
Fain...glad, joyful
Fantod...a state, an attack of uneasiness
Sequester...to isolate
Emancipate...to free from restraint
Endeavour...to strive after, attempt
Feral...untamed, wild

A range of stories, poems utilising the words above were read out.

Homework was presented which took us to break time.

The afternoon session involved an exercise whereby we developed a character's name by combining our first pet's name and the first street we lived in. E.g. Pet...Lucky, Street...Nottinghill Rd. So the character's name would be Lucky Nottinghill.
A good way of coming up with character names. The name suggested aspects of the character.

We then used the character in a short story/ poem.

Homework
Come up with another character's name by combining your best friend at school's first name with the suburb/town you first lived in...then...use that character in a story that incorporates the sentence
..."he thought he could find her in enemy territory"


16 August 2017

Record of meeting 16 August 2017



The writers at the meeting

Helene, Cath, Terry, Dennis, Lynn, Roberta, Pauline, Elizabeth

Words of the day

Flimflam – nonsense

Avatar -
 icon of a person

Fluorocarbon – a compound

Diabolic – outrageously wicked

Harridan – hag or vixenish woman

Ululate – to howl, hoot or lament

Prestidigitation – sleight of hand

Adamantine – unable to be broken, lustre


Writing from words of the day

The writers ululated and used the words to write about turning, dancing, TV channels, on the web site, an old air con, people living up the road, the red head and An icon.

Reading of homework

Writers read out their stories on the topics – full tilt at life, bitter sweet, E-books, death, 007, Patrick White, John Steinbeck, waiting and terrified.

The exercise

Helene provided happy pills to mentally digest plus an exercise to write about. The writers produced stories and poems about success and wacky weed, when I was young, running away, rabbits mate, music, suspicion, going for it, spring blooms & love, antibiotics, friendship and moods.

Dennis suggested seeing The 8th day – French film about a man with Down’s Syndrome.


Homework

A childhood memory

Facilitator for 23 August - Pauline


09 August 2017

Record of meeting 9 August 2017



The writers

Cath, Pauline, Dennis, Helene, Terry, Lynn, Pat, Elizabeth

Words of the day

Inhume – to bury

Unctuous – oily speech

Integrate – bring together

Watershed – ridge or crest line

Phantom – apparition or spectre

Plebiscite – agreement of the people

Earnest– money given in token, bargain making

Artificial – copy of something natural, contrived or affected

Writing from words of the day

The writers integrated the words of the day in a range of water shed stories - I’m going home, By the beach, New inventions, Moses and the 10 Commandments, In Canberra, Meeting for months and Was it possible.

Reading of homework

Six writers read out their stories - Pat and her bike, One of sixteen, Weight of history, Architectural horror and heads in buckets, Staying with Aunty Lilly and The last time.

The exercise
Dennis provided an excellent exercise with a choice of openings, some singing but no dancing plus an example of absurdist humour as inspiration. The writers created stories about -The house, The crash, Everything differently, Not kissing, In the lounge room, Cheating, I need to get home and You don’t know what happened.

Homework
The other week I read a book

Facilitator for 16 August

Helene

Christmas in August lunch

12 noon Monday 28 August 2017 Club Jervis Bay Huskisson


02 August 2017

Record of meeting 2 August 2017





The writers

Cath, Dennis, Helene, Pat, Terry

Words of day

Multitude - abundance

Particulate – minute particles

Spifflicate – treat roughly or severely

Mews – row of houses converted from stables

Faience – a glazed and coloured earthen wear

Writing from words of the day

The writers created a multitude of stories from the words of the day.

Reading of homework

The writers read out compelling first liners and stories. Topics included dragonflies, drought, death, crying and a wristwatch.

unmese: the blog

Dennis shared his publication unmese: the blog. The day to day account of Elena and Dino in Italy, February- March 2010. Published through blurb.com

Exercise – Lake Tanganyika

Pat provided each writer with six pages of information on Lake Tanganyika from Wikipedia. The writers produced a wide range of stories on fishing, travel, a   monster, business deals and to the north.

Thanks Pat for a wonderful exercise.

Homework

Last night in Hampton Court
Hampton Court

Next weeks facilitator and exercise provider

Dennis


Peter Porter Poetry Prize closes 3 December 2017

First prize is $5,000; second prize $2,000
Entry is $25
Entries need to be no more than 75 lines
Porter Prize AA e news ad August
2017

27 July 2017

Meeting 26th July 2017

In attendance.
Kath, Lynn, Pat,  Roberta, Terry
Apologies. Helene

*** Item not discussed yesterday but important.
There is a problem with the date for the Xmas in July lunch so the 31st July is off. We'll come up with another date next Wed.
Terry

Words of the day.
Polemic...a controversial argument
Chime...harmony, to agree, to chime in
Fraise...a horizontal palisade (usually part of a wooden fortification)
Codger...an eccentric man
Adroit...clever, skilful,

From our words we had these little gems.
Kath...peace restored
Lynn...a politician
Pat...a word game goes mad
Roberta...Edward the codger

Homework was related to die or dye.
Terry...Life for sale...a poem
Roberta...a story incorporating a multitude of euphemisms for death
Pat...The Guild Master
Lynn...the junk mail lady

Post afternoon tea we discussed writing as being a craft which needs to be learned.
Lynn led a discussion on Unity in writing.
Unity in time...Unity in place...Unity in plot...
As an example The Drover's Wife by Henry Lawson the story taking place over one day, in just one place (home) and with one idea (to kill the snake).

We also read out and discussed some "First lines, paragraphs from published books.

Homework
Each of us to write six "first lines" of our own for next meeting.
Take one of those "first lines" and write a story.

Next week's meeting (3rd August) will be facilitated by Pat who will also provide the exercise/s for the afternoon session.