04 December 2019

Christmas lunch 4 December 2019

The writers

Pauline, Helene, Fran, Pat. 

Trevor sent Christmas greetings with a painting.

Food of the day

Chicken, fish, zucchini, Haloumi

Exercise

The writers enjoyed their lunch and company

Meetings in 2020

The first meeting for the year will be held on Wednesday 5 February 2020, 1 pm at the Vincentia Golf Club.


22 November 2019

Writing group met Wednesday 6/11/19

Present were: Fran, Trev, Terry, Pat and Pauline so a good turnout. Helene could not come this month due to other commitments.

The future of homework/thought diaries

We discussed our homework/non-homework situation, not everyone was sure about thought diaries. However, one writer read out details which he said had helped him gain some perspective on a troublesome matter that had occurred recently. It was also discussed that the Thought Diary was not meant to be a deep and meaningful counselling type thing but rather thoughts that occurred to us randomly during the month.



Exercises

We did a short one word each 10 min write and read our pieces the words were Fold, Plankton, Mitigate, Dandelions and Manufacture. A bit of fun was had with these words and their juxta positioning….

We then wrote in the first person from the viewpoint of an inanimate object, which again was a bit of light hearted fun.

Christmas meeting

Christmas Meeting will be 1’ish at Pelicans on Wednesday 4th December. Arrive early if you want to spend some time writing, it will be lunch and catch up.




06 October 2019

Meeting 2 October 2019

Writers

Pat and Fran

Action

Fran bought in the book of short stories Candle in the dark. Pat and Fran then practiced their poetry writing skills

Fran also brought in an orange as a prop and the pair wrote about many orange things.



Pat brought in a Thought diary by an English author.

Homework

Write a thought dairy for a few days. Bring the diary for discussion and writing for the next meeting.




04 September 2019

Record of meeting 4 September 2019



The writers

Helene, Jo, Trevor, Fran, Pauline, Pat, Cath


The words of the day

Irk – to annoy

Scintillating – sparkling

Garbled – mix up or confuse

Firth – arm of the sea or estuary

Sinuous – many curves and turns

Calliope – beautifully voiced goddess

Jubilation – feeling of great happiness and triumph


Writing from words of the day

The group closed, Escape from the storm, The county fair, Performance cancelled, I saw the estuary, One of those days and Most days.


Exercise – Babushka dolls

The writers were inspired by the dolls and wrote about - Should have chosen her lover more carefully, In the box, What is that, Just take the doll, An excuse, At the airport and Riding the horse.


Exercise – the person in the sunglasses

The writers embraced the concept of sunglasses and wrote about - Hard to recognise, Above Collingwood beach, The greatest invention, John Lennon’s sunglasses, Not the local hospital, Rainbow sunglasses and Dark thoughts.


Homework

Not compulsory

25 August 2019

August 2019 update

Attendance numbers have dropped this year - resulting in fewer meetings being held.

As a result of the drop in numbers a few members have decided that from Wednesday 4 September 2019, meetings will be held monthly on the first Wednesday of the month.

Come to the Function room in the Vincentia Golf Club from 1 to 4 pm and bring a pen and paper or your electronic devise for writing.

08 July 2019

Lunch Wednesday 3 July 2019

The following writers met over lunch

Terry, Pat, Pauline, Jenny, Helene, Trevor


19 June 2019

No meeting held 19 June 2019

Pat was the only writer who attended on 19 June 2019

12 June 2019

No meeting held 12 June 2019


Helene was the only person who attended the Golf Club on 12 June 2019






05 June 2019

Record of meeting 5 June 2019


Humming bird collecting nectar

Writers

Terry, Pat, Helene, Trevor

Words of the day

Circumspect – careful not to take risks

Converse – turn around or put upside down

Cynosure – attracts attention by brilliance

Corrigendum – error to be corrected in print

Amalgamate – to unite in or as if in a mixture of elements

Nectar – a sweet liquid produced by flowers collected by bees

Caper – preserved flower bud or skip or dance about in a lively way


Writing from words of the day

The writers captured the words of the day and capered around as they wrote - I didn’t want to, My Dentist is not my mate, Poor little bee and In my garden.

Reading of homework


Three writers read out homework on the topics - My burnt dinner, The smell of perfume and A meal I cooked.

Exercise – Affects of The anti-anger virus 

The writers wrote about the advantages and disadvantages of the anti-anger virus - Everyone was nice, Chaos on a cruise ship, The ho-ho virus and Needing a snack.

Homework

Target practice

31 May 2019

Record of meeting 29 May 2019


Members in attendance


PAT, JENNY and PAULINE

The meeting ended early after beginning with some discussions about reasons for absences while we waited to see in anyone else turned up.


Words of the day


BUCOLIC - charming, picturesque, pertaining to country-side

TERCEL   2 meanings - fabric /Hawke

VULPICIDE - fox killing in an unsportsmanlike way

MEPHISTOPHELIAN   full of evil cunning,   one of the seven devils of medical demonology in Goethe’s Faust


Holidays and writing


PAT shared about her recent holiday; 23 days in China in an area of 10million people, polite but not much English. Amazing ancient buildings and broken pottery. 1,000 photos including toilets and lamp posts.


There was also writing about “Charles and gunfire and loving foxes”.


Jenny had written on a previous homework topic “We left early”.  It was very adventurous and action filled.


Homework for 5 June 2019



“I woke to the smell of smoke”               

29 May 2019

08 May 2019

Record of meeting 8 May 2019

The writers – Terry, Helene, Pauline

Apologies – Garry, Fran, Trevor, Jenny, Pat, Gail

The words of day

Frisson – a shudder of emotion

Ephemeral – lasting a very short time

Trivial – of little worth or importance

Raison d’être – the most important reason for existence 

Methylation – a process where methyl groups are added to the DNA.

Writing from words of the day

The writers shuddered as they wrote about Clive Palmer, It was Methylation and MI 6.

Reading of homework

The writers read homework on the topics - 20/20 hindsight, I would be at the Sydney Writers Festival and wild parties and Change.

SeeChange 1 to 10 June 2019

The writers discussed the SeeChange festival in particular the poetry event. It’s been over a decade since poet and comedian, Tug Dumbly, rocked a packed Husky Pub for the SeeChange Festival. Now he’s back for a long overdue return performance in which he’ll be reading poems from his just released book, Son Songs, as well as performing a bunch of his old favourite live poems and songs. Tug will be supported by some fine local poets, all in the beautiful surrounds of Capricorn – Andrew Harvey’s unique house in Tomerong.  Capricorn, is a hill top, stone house designed and built by Harv on virgin bush land with 180 degree view of Jervis Bay. There is ample parking and it is an all weather venue. Bring a plate to share. Book now at https://seechangefestival.net.au/festival-program/eclectic-events/

Homework

We left early ………..


01 May 2019

Record of meeting 1 May 2019


The writers – Terry, Helene, Gail, Jenny, Pat, Trevor

Apologies – Garry, Fran, Pauline


The words of day

Bombilating – buzz or hum

Alacrity – willing to do something

Discursive – not sticking to the subject

Gumshoe- rubber over shoes or detective

Bless – pronounce words in a religious rite 


Obsequious – servile, ingratiating, sycophantic, parasitic

Writing from words of the day

The writers grabbed the words of the day and wrote with alacrity about – The meeting, The bread, Work ethic, Bill just smiled, Private detective singing and On the straight and narrow.

Reading of homework

The writers read out homework on the topics - Before for the magistrate, Working in the back garden, My neighbour, What I see, A pretty room, Best friend and In dire straits.

Exercise – You see your pic on a Missing Poster

The writers wrote about - What’s this caper, Bright lights, Face recognition, Looked familiar and Front door.

Homework

If I knew then what I know now







24 April 2019

Record of meeting 24 April 2019

The writers – Terry, Gail, Pat, Sandy, Trevor, Helene

Apologies – Garry, Fran, Pauline, Jenny


The words of the day

Lassitude – laid back

Murse – purse for a male

Propinquity – closeness, similarity

Eclectic – diverse, extensive, varied

Redacted – edited text for publication

Emblazoned – conspicuously display or display a design on


Writing from words of the day

The writers wrote eclectic stories and poems about - The murse from Glebe, My second cousin, Reindeer hide, I couldn’t find it and Wayne was like his mother.


Reading of homework

The writers read out stories and poems about - Honeys hair and nails, In the army, Blonde hair, What have you done and Lots of different hair.

Discussion and decision

After a discussion of the value of feedback,the writers agreed to expand our homework reading segment. If any member wants a critique – they should express their request before reading out their homework. Other writers present if they chose to can then provide feedback immediately after the reading.

Homework

A dog’s eye view





17 April 2019

Record of meeting 17 April 2019

The writers - Helene, Gail, Jo, Pat

Apologies – Garry, Fran, Pauline, Trevor, Jenny

Enjoy the Easter break



The words of the day

Excratory – abusive, defamatory

Credulous - Too great a readiness to believe things

Gullible – easily persuaded to believe something credulous

Esoteric – intended for and likely to be understood by only a small number, obscure

Writing from words of the day

The writers wrote about - Near to being rude, Scott Morrison and In awe of him.

Reading of homework

The writers read out homework about The Chinese plastic conglomerate, My name is Skye and A sunset.

Exercise – the contents of your fridge

The four writers wrote about - I don’t need food, Throw the eggplant in the compost, Empty egg cartons and Vegan food

Homework

A bad day for my hair



10 April 2019

Record of meeting 10 April 2019

The writers - Helene, Trevor, Terry, Pauline, Jenny, Pat

Apologies – Garry, Gail, Fran


The words of the day

Mademoiselle – Miss

Powerless – without power

Enactors – people who enact

Geniculate – bends like a knee

Nadir – the lowest point of adversity or despair

Emoji – a small digital image to express emotion or idea 

Argot – the jargon or slang of a particular group or class

Geotropism – tendency to grow downwards under the influence of gravity

Writing from words of the day

The writers grabbed the words of the day while working in their argot wrote about - The name of Eric, My bad, The chimney, The spell had been cast, Just fired, The road ahead and Once in a lifetime.

Reading of homework

The six writers read out their homework about - Springing a leak, The kitchenette, Favourite blue socks, An unsuitable job for me, Unexpected stories from a published author and Coffee.

Exercise – memories of the Easter show

The writers delved into their memory banks and wrote about - Show bags, Like a trance, With the family, Excitement and The show is the worst.

Exercise – a knock on your door

The writers enthusiastically wrote about - Don’t invade my space, Your singing is bad, A knock and I froze, No selling sign, In the bath and Donations. 

Homework

Kill off a difficult relative or

Write why and how a giant reduces his size





03 April 2019

Record of meeting 3 April 2019

The writers - Helene, Trevor, Garry, Terry, Pauline, Pat

Apologies – Gail, Fran, Jenny


The words of the day

Save face - avoid humiliation
Grifter – petty or small- scale swindler
Eponymous – named after a particular person or group
Leverage – knowledge or influence saving face – dignity, prestige
Meme – an image, video, place, text spread rapidly by Internet users

Writing from words of the day

The writers used the words of the day and wrote about - Black bar night club, Doing a Bradbury, Jones town, Aunty Meme (a brilliant poem) and The bible.

Reading of homework

The six writers read homework about - Cruise diary of a hair dresser; I came from Gladesville, Last scene from the Titanic with music, Norovirus on board, My love affair with P and O and The hundred dollar note.

Exercise – write about a lie you told

The six writers wrote about – I stopped stealing, I ran into my brother’s car, I stole a cigarette, I had a dream, Didn’t feel a twinge and I am too much of a wimp.

Homework

You find a blood spattered note on the kitchen bench. What happened?


Or your choice.












27 March 2019

Record of meeting 27 March 2019


The writers - Helene, Trevor, Jenny, Garry

Apologies – Gail, Terry, Pat, Fran, Pauline, Jo

The words of the day

Bachata – dance to Bachata music from the Dominican Republic

Troll –     an ugly creature depicted as either a giant or dwarf

-      People who deliberately upset others on the internet

Luxuriant – lush, rich, abundant and thick and healthy hair

Vague – unclear, indefinite character or meaning

Inconsistent – not staying the same throughout

Recalcitrant – uncooperative, defiant

Writing from words of the day

The four writers wrote about - On the dance floor, Best fit, Using words and Dancing with the stars.

Reading of homework

The four writers read homework about - Scottish music, Hitler is alive, Shaking hands and No more buzzing bees.

Exercise – the perfect job for you

The writers expressed their interest in an interesting range of careers - Mattress and chocolate tester, Managing an Aquaponic farm for medicinal herbs, Glamping resort and a range of activities they like doing anyway.

Homework

On a cruise ship












20 March 2019

Record of meeting 20 March 2019

The writers - Helene, Trevor, Terry, Gail, Pauline, Garry, Sandy

Apologies – Pat, Fran, Jenny

The words of the day               

Disaffected – no longer believe

Traduce – speak badly, defame

Luminary – expert in a subject

Repine – to fret or feel discontent

Persona – a face you choose to represent

Heath Robinson – an English cartoonist best known for drawings of whimsically elaborate machines to achieve simple objectives

Writing from words of the day

The writers used the words of the day to write about - Lost in space, I like simple cartoons, According to his mother, Thai politics, Left side of the brain and NSW elections.

Reading of homework

Seven writers read out their homework on the topics - The bookshop, Connections, Painting of a horse, medication, star sign, Citizens of Australia unite, In Wagga, Round the world 1995 and Dancing in St Georges Basin.

Exercise – helium, circus, rings, balloons, popcorn, clown, elephant, laugh, top, tent, tame, tight rope, acrobat, master, lion. The writers choose three words and used the phrase “She shrugged her shoulders and said I don’t know why” and wrote about

Helium gas, We aren’t getting anywhere, The party type, He laughs at his own jokes, Favourite snack, Animals and Hot air balloons.

Exercise – looking through the peep hole

The writers wrote about - I tricked police, Snort and a grunt, No visitors there, Myself at 93, List of horrors, I hid in the shower and Trick or Treat.

Homework - It was written on his hand











13 March 2019

Record of meeting 13 March 2019

The writers - Helene, Trevor, Terry, Jenny, Pauline, Jo. Welcome Sandy

Apologies – Garry, Pat, Fran, Gail

The words of the day

Milieu – surroundings

Futility – waste of time

Attachment – strong belief

Prodigal – recklessly extravagant

Onomatopoeia – a word from a sound

Reconnaissance – explore, survey, investigate

Beglamoured – to impress or deceive with glamour

Writing from words of the day

The writers attached themselves to the words of the day and wrote about - The Opera House, In the jungle, Another of those situations, The gentle murmur, Don’t do it in bed, The oldies and Trump can boom or tweet.

Reading of homework

Four writers read out stories - Rather clean the yard, Something strange, Hungry beast, Rocket man & Trump and A progressive write.

Exercise using an action, person, item, texture, emotion and colour

The seven writers observed their immediate environment and wrote about - Ice on the golf club, A Coca Cola sign, The mouldy leather bag, Like the clear water in the bottle, A lonely glass of water on a tray, White drapes and Silver stars.

Exercise – a progressive write

The six writers each started a story and others completed the story on the topics - Chippies, The paper was folded, Huskisson has plenty of food, In the cave, A holiday cruise and Culture in the street.

Homework

What a co-incidence

06 March 2019

Record of meeting 6 March 2019


The writers - Helene, Trevor, Garry

Visitor - Hans

Apologies - Pat, Terry, Fran, Gail, Jenny, Pauline

Garry has developed a web page for online learning English
Have a look at www.yes2day.net




The words of the day

Inveterate – ingrained

Admonished – reprimand or advise

Flotsam – wreckage of a ship or its cargo

Embodied – visualised, alive, personified, come to life

Philosophy – love wisdom Philo – Love & Sophia – wisdom

Transmogrified – change or altered with humorous effect

Jetsam – unwanted material or goods thrown overboard from a ship and washed ashore

Suzerainty – any relationship where one region controls foreign policy of a tributary state


Writing from words of the day

The writers wrote about - Chaotic week, Liar and Pastry.


Reading of homework

Three writers read out homework about – Will prison guards know the score, Deep Purple revisited and Getting lost in China.


Update from Hans Kieft on song writing project

Hans attended the meeting and suggested

  • The writers group work together develop a story using poems and stories
  • The writing group work to develop five or ten concept ideas
  • This is a long term project
  • Target audience 20 to 60 age group –Itune and Spotify users
  • Target the I- tune audience
  • Not financially worth while to make a CD
  • Hans would like to receive poems to make into lyrics
  • The writer will receive copyright
                                     
If writers agree we can incorporate this project into exercises and homework. If people prefer they can contact Hans Kieft direct on 0438 410 961 to discuss working with him.

Hans played several songs based on poems written by Helene – which were brilliant.


Homework

Write a poem or story that can be the key message of an album – topic - Working together.


27 February 2019

Record of meeting 27 February 2019

The writers

Pauline, Helene, Trevor, Garry, Gail, Jenny

Apologies  - Pat, Terry and Fran


Update on lyric writing opportunity

Helene has sent several poems to Hans – two have been turned into songs. Hans has advised “thinking more around the line of your writing group coming up with a concept and this work out into a 80 minute album.  I hope that when the album is finished I be able to place the album on iTunes”. Contact Helene or Hans if you want more information.


The words of the day


Grotto – small picturesque cave

Scrubber – maid, low ranking woman

Avuncular – kind and friendly like an uncle

Obsequious – excessively attentive, slimy

Palate – the roof of the mouth, appreciation of flavours

Latitude – parallel, north or south of the equator, scope for freedom of action or thought


Writing from words of the day

The writers attentively wrote about - A calmness spread over my body, A visit to the Blue Grotto, All his tricks, A slip, She dragged the vacuum cleaner and Aunty Kim.


Reading of homework

Six writers read homework about –

Annie the teacher and the four leaf clover

Different families - At the church and at his grave site

1953 – first visit to Vincentia and later at a small cottage

A reunion journal of Scottish families starting meetings with songs the Highlanders and ending with Mull of Kintyre

Hot air balloons drifting by as life continues

Messages in the night


Exercise – sensitive ears

The writers wrote about - Kevin I think we have a problem, Ear lobes, Freak hearing in Pakistan, A mystery or curse, Ear therapy for back pain.


Homework

Develop the concept for an album of your favourite band – theme for the album, possible song names and even some lyrics for one song.

Or complete an exercise from A Novel in year. If you need copies of the exercises contact Helene Gaul on 0418 601 451.

20 February 2019

Record of meeting 20 February 2019

The writers

Pauline, Helene, Trevor, Garry, Gail and welcome to Jenny. Also welcome to visitors Hans and Cosmix. Apologies Terry and Fran


Country club Sanctuary Point Friday 15 February 2019 Open day

Thank you to Pauline who attended the Open day and talked to people about our group.


The words of the day

Vacuous – empty
Kitsch – gaudy, tasteless
Wordsmith – a skilled user of words
Patronising – think they are superior
Tarmacadam – road surface of tar and stones
Tango – a dance and the letter T in radio communications
Sublime – great excellence and extreme or unparalleled
Mercurial – changeable of light or mood, contains mercury
Panegyric – a speech in praise of someone or something

Writing from words of the day

The wordsmiths wrote about - In praise of the teacher, She must apply herself, The mood of the ballroom, Mrs Bouquet and What I expect.

Opportunities for writing lyrics and getting out your message


Hans Kieft attended the meeting asking if any writers were interested in working with him to write song lyrics to music he composes. Hans would be interested to see some of your previous poems.


Contact Hans on 0438 410 961 or bolderdust@gmail.com if you are interested


Cosmix also talked about opportunities for writers to send out their messages on the second Wednesday of every month after 4 pm at Angels Café. Next opportunity to share your ideas is Wednesday 13 March 2019 4 pm.

Reading of homework

Four writers read out brilliant homework including - Fear of being detained in PNG, Paisley socks, Pressure socks gone, Wide eyed wonder and Feeling like fairy floss.

Exercise – morning after the night before driving home to confess where you have been

Four writers wrote about - An extra shift or was I drugged, One too many Marguerites, In the Kimberley and The fried rice.

Exercise – an object from your life

Five writers read out stories about - My father’s piano, My Queens Guide badge, Koala pyjama bag, I dressed as an Artist and I am dreaming of a Marnado Christmas.

Homework

Write the first and last paragraphs of the book you lack the courage to publish.